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    User Name

    User Name Angry Marines. Always angry, all the time. >:C LPA Super Member

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    Cheated and beaten
    It seems that what's left is my only hope
    Though fearing these lies that pursue me

    I'm blinded by this confusion
    I've been consumed by it
    It seems that everything has fallen apart in front of me
    And even among all of this, I look up to the sky
    And I am humbled

    Watch over me
    I need You more than ever

    Take me further away from the chaos
    Further away from this hate
    Further away from the confusion
    Take me further away from myself</div>
     
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    Will

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    Very nice. 9/10.
     
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    Jawknee

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    I really like your style, Cameron. What a great poem, man.
     
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    User Name

    User Name Angry Marines. Always angry, all the time. >:C LPA Super Member

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    These days there are a lot of things to say
    These days there are a lot of things to do
    And a lot of people to hurt

    Is there really a point to all of this?
    Am I really doing this in the name of a higher power,
    Or am I just giving in to my selfish desires?
    Are these everyday activities going to benefit me in the long run?
    Are they really going to save me in the end?

    These days I can’t seem to remember who I am
    These days I can’t seem to remember who I want to be
    Don’t mold me.

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    I'm not done with it yet, but I thought I would share it.
     
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    Jawknee

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    It's great so far - very profound; not like other stuff I find here.
     
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    Andrea

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    Very good! Keep up the good work! :)
     

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