Taken Over Me

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    Dedicated

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    "Taken Over Me"

    Your sweet November this year settled for,
    Nothing more than dirty looks to prevent talk,
    And when we did the conversation lacked it all,
    From tounges touching lips to breath exhaled,
    I've never felt like this before,
    With every lie I never said and every glance I adored,
    I never thought you could abhor with such vigor,
    I enjoyed, the way you stared into my eyes,
    I watched you tear them out in awe,
    Without a glimse of something like remorse,
    You're such an great example of the things I scorn,
    And I've never felt like this before,
    And I will never feel like this again.

    You left a bloodstain on my sleeve,
    Down my chest and in my dreams,
    You've taken over me,
    And I'll never feel again.

    Why did I leave my heart in such an obvious location?
    And why did I let it slip from lips during my conversation?
    I knew you were a slave to bitter feelings and your past,
    But never thought my livid breaths would quickly come to pass,
    Due to actions which were brash and which suddenly turned crass,
    I will never be the same again,
    I can't believe I watched with such composure,
    As you turned around and torchered me,
    Burnt me to the ground only so you could stamp me out,
    But the perplexity I held so close,
    That night you opened up my wounds,
    With competence I was disembodied,
    But I will never let that feeling go,
    'Cause I have never felt like that before,
    And I will never feel like that again.

    You left a bloodstain on my sleeve,
    Down my chest and in my dreams,
    You've taken over me,
    And I'll never feel again.

    And as the sun beams over my broken body,
    I feel it's warmth and feel your cold disperse,
    With a smile and a nod I tell the world I'm fine,
    And I've delt with things much worse,
    And as I clamber from my cage,
    I wipe the blood off with my sleeve,
    I place my heart back in my chest,
    From on the table which it slept,
    Take one look around the room then sigh and leave.
     
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    Luke

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    Ace to say the least Dave, well done. :)
     
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    Cheers Luke
     

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