For all you great writers out there, take a look at this, and judge Once I didn’t know I could have a say in who I am Didn’t know my life was mine to control Now I understand who I am, and want to get rid of the trash that planned my years at hand Can I get rid of the memories you painted in my brain? Can I escape from this growing pain? It’s draining all my thoughts, blurred all stuff, and now I forgot how to make them stop I’m worked up, because you were holding me back Afraid that I wouldn’t come back, but now I’m on the right track Your actions are the reasons why I packed and left There’s a deeper meaning in all these words I’ve kept They were frozen in my dreams to react, to repeat in an never ending elastic lap I was trapped but found a way to get back up Tucked in my feelings and not wanting you to ever see me What came of these dreams in the pain I thought that I would stay the same But then it came to me that all of this caused me nothing but pain Now I’m drained of all this shit You gave me all the fears to make me Now I hate me And you created all that I see But it’s not at all what I want to be (I’ll try to recreate myself, I’ll try to get back myself) I woke up at last in control and having a blast Got a grasp of my dreams and all that seemed bleeding but never ending This world you controlled you stole My whole life was down in the gutter until this day that you began to stutter It was all something you molded, you chose it though I didn’t know it I once thought that I was below all things No dreams of something to be or no emotions in me Till one day I saw some wings, an angel came from above a gave me sight of what my life should be like That’s when I took flight that one night Now I know what it’s like to be in a fight To not back down when in a fright Not a puppet anymore, not there to be what you adore No more un rewarding chores Once glued to you I’m me, you’re you, and my old self shall be going to heaven soon You gave me all the fears to make me Now I hate me And you created all that I see But it’s not at all what I want to be (I’ll try to recreate myself, I’ll try to get back myself) I’ll try to recreate myself, I’ll try to get back myself Maybe I’m confused of being stuck in the mold of your shoes Not a clue of who I really was, destroyed by knowing I was you Got lifted in the air and spread some wings Trying flee all this pain that hatred brings That’s when I found out what life means Bringing this to a conclusion, I was sick of the confusion All the twisted thoughts brought upon me Today were not together I’m done being bored I was young and felt alone Now I’m old and I’m not going to fold anymore This is my life, and my fight I not going to be backing down tonight You gave me all the fears to make me Now I hate me And you created all that I see But it’s not at all what I want to be (I’ll try to recreate myself, I’ll try to get back myself) All this friction has caused nothing but sparks, from your harsh remarks I was in the dark, but I’m not going to have this shit anymore Now I’m parked where my life will be in the light, where it should have been before This is my life, and my fight I not going to be backing down tonight I’ll try to recreate myself, I’ll try to get back myself
u spelt control wrong. other than that this is really good of u HB. i really think this was your best piece so far !! :hugz: