the Stone of Failure

I worked really hard on this one, rate and tell me what you think.

It's you and me now,
In this lonley world of innocence,
anger rises highly,
in this plague of peaceful darkness,

I've been lonely,
I've been blind,
I've been raged towards suicide,
so my hands are firmly tied,
to the sinking stone of failure,

sinking me down,
sinking me down,
to my pitch black darkness below,

sinking me down,
sinking me down,
with the anger I bestow,

bury my face within my hands,
covering my self with tears,
each one that surfaces and falls to the ground,
Is a reminder of how I feel,

I've been lonely,
no will to survive,
lonliness creeping,
towards the happiness I strive,

I've learned nothing,
nothing worth learning,
so i'm tied to the stone,
with failure still burning,

sinking me down,
(to pitch black darkness)
sinking me down,
(to the angered surface)
sinking me down,
sinking me down,
sinking me down,

lonley,
blind,
no will to survive,
sinking me down,
toward raging suicide,

stop me now,
before it's to late,
the stone is falling,
within ruining my fate,

sinking,
sinking,
sinking me down.

 

I got that sinkin feeling when I read that

That was good! Like it

 

Thanks very much.

 

Eh, it's okay. A little cliched, but that's okay. I can relate to failure, so..


7/10



write about love now. just think of me when you're writing that

 

Nice job Love is the next topic? Maybe?

 

Okay, since your so hot Casey i'll consider it.