The Untitled Poem

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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Okay I did this in study hall cause I got bored. If someone can give me some constructive critisism and a title, they get a cookie.


    "The Untitled Poem"
    Your insidious ways have
    corrupted me for the last time
    I shall not be kept down
    And brought to my own confine
    Evanesced feelings have
    Been brought to full bloom
    And thoughts of angst and sorrow
    Have now been embedded
    Into their own darkness and gloom
    And as your heart within
    Begins to fade and thin
    I'll be there, hiding in the shadows
    And as your final thread breaks you
    I'll be there, watching you hang in the gallows
    And as I watch with rain pouring down upon me
    I already see them lowering your casket
    I'll watch as all your friends, and even your foes
    Are all brought to mourning
    Beginning to wonder, that despite your friendships
    If inside they are rejoycing
    Hearing them shout to me
    "you have no conscience!"
    When truely, the hypocrisy lies within
    Waiting to emerge and watch you
    Silently lurking
    Waiting for your internal lights to go dim
     

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