Hey guys, I just want to present my first "real" song text to you and especially all the native English speakers. I wrote it some weeks ago and it would be nice to receive some feedback. The text called 'Uncertainty (Send Me The Right Words)' deals with the loss of a beloved person and/or a broken relationship. What do you think about it? Thanks in advance! Verse I: -------- As I'm lying on the floor I'm glancing out the windows Starring at whipping rain Dripping down like my tears These days life feels empty Uncertainty swallows me Everything was in vain And I can't let go Verse II: --------- The vault has darkened fast Protected by low clouds Will I ever see you shine A phrase burned into my mind Emotions evoked by the sounds Of dazing loneliness They claim they tried everything But you won't rise from the dead Chorus: --------- And everything I felt was - Just so real I wish I could kiss the sleep - From your eyes You turned into ashes and I Hope you aren't gone forever I wish you would send me - The right words Verse III: ---------- I excused a hundred wars waged Since our roads did separate Tell me what am I living for Is it wise to follow you I still recall every single day Thought we'd smile in eternity Shall I just cut out this stone And throw my grief far away Final Chorus: --------------- And everything I felt was - Just so real I wish I could kiss the sleep - From your eyes The pendulum stands still My memories keep on fading I wish you would send me - The right words