The memory trickling down my mind like drops of the acid rain, It feeds upon the sanity I have left; it devours the pleasure in my brain, Crystal coal down to my heart, I’m losing everything I didn’t even gain, From now on, every fear trapped inside shall all be dedicated to your name. Feed me by the morsels in this dying mortality, Feel me by the inches as I get farther from being free, Hold me closer as I come towards these failing pleas, I shall be no longer mine; I’ll be fine, when I’m deceased. Torn from the future, I’m closer to the past that keeps reminding me, Suffocated by the smoke of my thoughts, I’m trapped in all what I see, I have no time to care for this world, and yet I’ve never felt so guilty, It’s a feeling close to being numb, yet I swear that I’m not close to feeling empty. Crush my soul beneath your intense hate, Push me down the cliff, for all the torture you create, I’m no longer meat and mind, I’m an existence that you forbade, Judge me by you injustice, kill me for the mistakes I never made. Futility is catching on as fading minutes stare me in the eye, Weariness feels like a blessing out in the open, as I bid goodbye, Closer to my final end, pausing never to look back, never to ever need to try, I’m closer to rebirth, very close to resurrection, much more closer to the time I die. Ignore my life; your hell shall bring you into it someday, There will be a time before I go, you’ll meet my life on your way, Unlawful to you shall become the breath of air from freedom’s bay, Taste my life, live it like me, find reason in why you threw me away. your comments....
Bloody hell. This is good. No. This is brilliantly good. There. Much of the improvement. Keep it up Cheers