Just an idea I had...not sure if it's finished quite yet... Vocal: I don't wanna hear one more word 'cause if it isn't "I love you" then it's just gonna hurt I'd rather be beaten to death than be abused by your words and always remember the scars that they left I'm pouring my heart into another melting pot along with your screams , your glares and hate to keep it hot If you wanna leave then go ahead just don't stand there telling me who all will end up in your bed And when you're finally gone please don't try to claw your way back like the piercing tunes of your seductive song I'm pouring my heart into another melting pot along with your screams , your glares and hate to keep it hot Please...just go just go Please...do know do know I am...all broke so alone... hope someone likes it for now...
The first verse, you it sounds off when you have "word" in singular form, but then say the next word should be "I love you". I think you should have made the word "word" plural. Overall, it is a bit rough around the edges. so you can really tell it's a work in progress. I like the main idea though. And hello cyclops