What's This Life For

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    Friskey™

    Friskey™ LPA Super Member LPA Addict

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    What’s This Life For?

    I think I’ve been here before
    Trying to find my way out
    I can’t even talk to you anymore
    Because of what you’ve done to me
    Is the last thing I thought you ever do?
    You made me realize what this life is for

    You killed me again
    This time I think it’s for real
    What’s this life for?
    The wounds are far from healing
    I'm just out of it today
    And I say what this life is for?
    (What’s this life for?)

    What have I done?
    I forgive you for anything
    I might have done wrong
    To hurt you
    Please forgive me
    For the shit I might have caused you
    I can't even see now
    Or even hear what’s going on

    I’m just stuck in here
    Stuck in here forever
    Just stuck in here
    Stuck in here forever
    Just please forgive me now
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    the words are good - there are just a few problems with a few lines:
    I thought this song was about what you did to someone else ...
    I simply don't get this line, because it doesn't fit with the lines around it.
    "these wounds will never heal" would be a better line, since it rhymes with the line before it.
    I thought they're supposed to forgive you ...

    that's all.
     

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