Most people are going to think that I just copied KSE's song and posted it here (whoever you are...shame on you ) Well this is a new song that I just written. When Darkness Falls Dear doctor Can't you see what the hell is wrong with me? Is it paranoia? Or insomnia? Tell me what is going on? Is it a case of delusion? Is it apathy? "No" he said "It's a case of broken heart" Only happens On the worst of nights It only happens when darkness falls I sit here at night When the memories break down and cry The anger subsides When I close my eyes And I forget over and over again When darkness falls To whom it may concern To whom this is addressed to Is it gone now? Or am I still here? Tell me what is going on Why is she still here? Why is she still following me? "No" she said "It's a case of broken heart" Only happens On the worst of nights It only happens when darkness falls I sit down and wonder Why am I still dreaming about... What could've been I need to forget this now And wait for the sunrise to come up Come up now.
Go Friskey! It's really, really good.. Only I kind of freaked out when I saw the 'Doctor' bit and was convinced that it would be 'Dr Jones, Dr Jones'... Never mind.
I've gotta say this aint half bad.........ITS ALL BAD! J/K Its good but it needs work. Good job 8/10 B)