You can make the right turns / You'll still end up in the wrong place: So tired yet still awake / can't sleep / I'm just a tool It's your fault / your will / I look like a fool Kicking and Screaming / still I won't be heard Your words / soothing / still makes it worse So confused / your actions / opposite of what you say I'm so close / close to giving up / go away Get some distance / but stay near by Locked away / I still ask / wonder ''WHY!?'' You hurt me / to get back at you You won't let go / you're scared too...aren't you!? You say you love me / verbs / failed in taking action Not exactly /you took action / wrong actions Wrong place / wrong time / wrong damn heart I'm a fool / no more / a tool / no more / torn apart Every dream / every bit of hope / I'm free Free of you / and now captured / inside of me Comments: this one's a bit deep to me...it's about a person (more a loved one than just a random person) that get's really close to you...and then uses you bit by bit without your noticing it...and once you finally realize it...you get rid of your 'problem'...still you're not really happy with the situation...you've gotten so used to the constant tension and abuse (verbal of course) that you just end up making yourself go insane... just to get my having to explain it later out of the way =P thoughts plz
Not bad. Sounds like someone cheating on someone else (Wrong place / wrong time / wrong damn heart). I just got a girlfriend and now anytime I read something like this it makes me think of how terrible I would feel if things ended. Good job though.
you know me already!You know that whatever you write i'll love it!It's perfect as always!It touches really deep.Great job!